I have had some new ideas upon how I am going to do this:
- Opening title "two friends"
- Shot of two people racing on a luggage trolley
- Title "now"
- shot of the two laughin in a bar
- Title "enemies"
- Shot of a third person telling them one will be fired
- Rapid editing now used of random moments of physical comedy
- Title Comedy factory presents: Luggage Boys
- The final scene is undecided as of yet however an idea i had was going to have it end with the two in a face off?
These Ideas will be put into story boards and uploaded with the next post: Cast, Locations and Final Ideas
I like the way you’ve set this out, it's really clear in my head how it would look. If I may suggest after all the credits, I though you could have your two characters facing each other in a split second clip.
ReplyDeleteIn storyboard form I could get a better picture of what you are trying to achieve and make suggestions.
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