Tuesday 19 January 2010

Expansion Upon Ideas

The main point with this production is that it is a teaser trailer and not a full blown reveal trailer. Given the current genre which I am doing, comedy, that could be a little difficult as I must give away a little but not too much.
I have had some new ideas upon how I am going to do this:

  • Opening title "two friends"
  • Shot of two people racing on a luggage trolley
  • Title "now"
  • shot of the two laughin in a bar
  • Title "enemies"
  • Shot of a third person telling them one will be fired
  • Rapid editing now used of random moments of physical comedy
  • Title Comedy factory presents: Luggage Boys
  • The final scene is undecided as of yet however an idea i had was going to have it end with the two in a face off?

These Ideas will be put into story boards and uploaded with the next post: Cast, Locations and Final Ideas

2 comments:

  1. I like the way you’ve set this out, it's really clear in my head how it would look. If I may suggest after all the credits, I though you could have your two characters facing each other in a split second clip.

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  2. In storyboard form I could get a better picture of what you are trying to achieve and make suggestions.

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