

While i did not receive much feedback, what i did receive was useful in identifying the good and the bad points of my main task and ancillary texts and show how they could be improved.
The comments which i did receive were mostly from my media class and other media students in the school who provided useful input and information about how my project was shaping up and what it was going to be in their minds.
During the planning stage for my trailer i posted a list of events which i wanted to happen during the trailer, i made the list as detailed as i could including the camera angles and speed of editing which i wanted to use. One of my friends, Ronan JD Sullivan commented on this post and told me his thoughts, he said "its really clear in my head how it all would look", he also made a suggestion that i "have the characters facing each other in a split clip". While i did not get to make a split clip for my final scene, i did take his comment and used it to expand upon my ideas and come up with a shorter trailer for easy editing.
The feedback that i received after posting all the pieces onto the blog allowed me to see what i had done wrong and how i could improve it for next time, or how it could have been edited to look better. The comments told me how i could improve the spacing on the poster, and how i could have used more sound effects on the trailer such as using a build up effect before the main title music set it.
Filming went off very smoothly and with only a few minor problems of laughter during some of the scenes which meant some substitutions had to be made
Storyboard is now available, could not be rotated on the blog
These Ideas will be put into story boards and uploaded with the next post: Cast, Locations and Final Ideas
This trailer is a trailer of a film which is parodying many others, as this is the case most of the parts shown in the trailer are showing parts of other films which came out at the time of the films production re enacted by the cast in a comedic way. The trailer shows small clips from various parts of the film which have little to no contnuity in them, this is quite standard of a conventional trailer, however most trailers show sections of the plot which the audience are sometimes able to string together, as this film does not have any real plot to it, the trailer does not need to show any evidence of a plot. Returning to the first point about showing small sections of jokes in the film, this is standard of a comedy trailer as in order to entice an audience into watching the film, a trailer must show short snip in parts which will appeal the most, this is true for all trailers, e.g. action films will often show the most parts with explosions, or a horror film will often show the parts which lead up to a scare or the climax of a scare. This technique is applied to most trailers shown and this one is no different, I will be applying the same technique to my production, however due to time constraits it will need to be much shorter than the two minute trailer shown.